1/- The Figure 1/- is an important part of the design but its design is bad.
The ends of the scroll at the top are poor and better effect should be possible by omitting them and continuing the sidelines upwards.
The detail on each side of the dates and between the ovals is hard to follow; it needs to be clarified with due regard to the ultimate size.
The dates need to be strengthened. It is worth considering whether the lateral lines should not be continued across the base to frame the picture, To get uniformity they could, in that case, be made a little thinner.
Much of the detail of the scenes at the base of the picture is likely to be lost on reductio